Posts Tagged ‘hair’

Is there any way to deep fry a cloud?

I’m hosting a tea party for enthusiasts of deep fried weather occurrences Chosen Answer: well Aspira your going to need lots of grease if you wanna do that, but hey in the mean time carry on collecting it from your hair and I’ll have a word with Simon to see if we can get you [...]

What do you think of this & what can happen next? x?

Becky let her hair fall just past her shoulders. She was tired and the music was ringing in her ears, she couldn’t hear herself think. Slowly she began to scan the party looking for Louis, she needed him to take her home. After a few minutes she realised all hope was in vain so she [...]

How Can I Improve This Chapter?

I’m writing some prose just for fun and it’s been going pretty well. But Chapter 3 gave me a lot of trouble. Does anyone know how I can improve it? ———————————————————————————————————- Jeannie could not help but notice how her flame red hair clashed with the fluorescent pink walls. Pulling her sleeping bag over her head, [...]