Posts Tagged ‘criticism’

can someone give me literary criticism on I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud?

I wandered lonely as a cloud That floats on high o’er vales and hills, When all at once I saw a crowd, A host, of golden daffodils, Beside the lake, beneath the trees Fluttering and dancing in the breeze. Continuous as the stars that shine And twinkle on the Milky Way, They stretched in never-ending [...]

What do you think? Any constructive criticism?

Two Halves The physical man decides to dominate dearthy delvings, But his inner reserve is weak. The psychical man searches through a tempest telling, And his own mind is in a heap. The physical structure of the decks and streets, And the psychological muster of the mind. The teeth will eat the tasty meat, But [...]