Chapter 1 I wake up again disappointed, feeling empty. Chest feels constricted; and throat, tight. Hard to swallow, still I try. I look around my room: a portrait of us on the nightstand next to my bed, a couple movie posters hanging on the wall of movies I don’t like anymore, an almost empty bottle [...]
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what you think of the first chapter of my novel?
February 16th, 2012 
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does this sound interesting AT ALL to you?
February 7th, 2012 Cloud Hosting i got a creativity surge not too long ago and i felt like writing. i wrote a couple pages then got really really into it so i kept writing. i wanna know what you think of this exerpt and if you like it, where could i post it so that other people may read it. [...]
How Can I Improve This Chapter?
January 8th, 2012 Cloud Hosting I’m writing some prose just for fun and it’s been going pretty well. But Chapter 3 gave me a lot of trouble. Does anyone know how I can improve it? ———————————————————————————————————- Jeannie could not help but notice how her flame red hair clashed with the fluorescent pink walls. Pulling her sleeping bag over her head, [...]